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Band 6+: The grapgh below shows China's population by age group starting in 1960 and including forecast to 2050.

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The image depicts China's population distribution by age group as a percentage of the total from 1960 to 2050. In 1960, ages 0-14 constituted approximately 40%, 15-64 was about 55%, and 65+ was under 5%. By 2010, 0-14 decreased to about 20%, 15-64 peaked at roughly 72%, and 65+ rose slightly above 8%. Projections for 2050 show 0-14 stabilizing near 15%, 15-64 reducing to approximately 55%, and 65+ significantly increasing to about 30%. The graph shows an inverse relationship between 0-14 and 65+ over time, with 15-64 following an upward arc then downward from the 2010s.

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The line graph compare china’s population in different kinds of age from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, while people who age 65+ and 15-64 showed increasing trends, the reversal was true for people by age 0-14. The biggest change and biggest figure was shown people who age 15-64.

Focusing on the increase first, there were changes for both ages 15-64 and 65+. The figure for people by age 15-64 accounted for at 40% in 1960. The figure for population by aged 14-64 in china went up significantly from 40% to 50% between 1960 and 1980, then grew to 68 in 2000, after which it rose noticeably to 70 in 2020. Starting at 7% in 1960, the figure for china’s population by age 65+ upward insignificantly about 11% in 1980. Before increasing to 17% in 2020, the figure for aged 65+ had grew slightly from 11% to 13% from 1980 to 2000.

By contrast, the number of by age 0-14 showed reversal changes. The percentage of population age 0-14 in china decreased from 45% to 38% between 1960 and 1980, then declined slightly to 30% in 2000, after which it fell noticeably to 25% in 2020.

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview of the trends in China's population by age group from 1960 to 2020. There may be some omissions or lapses in detail, and the language could be more precise and varied. To improve, focus on using more specific data points and a wider range of vocabulary to describe the changes. Also, ensure that all key features of the graph are addressed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the flow could be improved. The 'Overall' paragraph is a good start, but the subsequent paragraphs could benefit from clearer topic sentences and transitions. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, instead of repeating 'the figure for people by age...', try using synonyms or pronouns to maintain reader interest and improve cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While words like 'significantly' and 'noticeably' are used, incorporating a wider range of descriptive adjectives and adverbs could enhance the report. For instance, instead of just 'increased,' consider using 'soared,' 'climbed,' or 'expanded.' Also, be mindful of using the correct form of words (e.g., 'age' vs. 'aged'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a basic understanding of grammar, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('the,' 'a,' 'an'). For example, 'people who age 65+' should be 'people aged 65+' or 'people who are 65+.' Also, review sentence structure to ensure clarity and avoid awkward phrasing. Proofreading carefully before submission can help catch these errors.

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