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Band 7+: The grapgh below shows China's population by age group starting in 1960 and including forecast to 2050.

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The image depicts China's population distribution by age group as a percentage of the total from 1960 to 2050. In 1960, ages 0-14 constituted approximately 40%, 15-64 was about 55%, and 65+ was under 5%. By 2010, 0-14 decreased to about 20%, 15-64 peaked at roughly 72%, and 65+ rose slightly above 8%. Projections for 2050 show 0-14 stabilizing near 15%, 15-64 reducing to approximately 55%, and 65+ significantly increasing to about 30%. The graph shows an inverse relationship between 0-14 and 65+ over time, with 15-64 following an upward arc then downward from the 2010s.

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The line graph illustrates China’s population by age group from 1960 to 2050.

Overall, the population of people aged above 65 and 15-64 witnessed an upward trend, and it is anticipated that these figures will increase, while the group of 0-14 started with the highest percentage, and it is predicted that it will drop by the end of the period.

In terms of people who aged 0-14, this figure began at approximately 45% in 1960, dropped significantly to less than 35% by 2020, and it is predicted that it will fall considerably to 17.5% and become the lowest figure toward the end of the period.

In 1960, about 40% of population were people who aged 15-64, and this percentage heat a peak of 70% by 2020, and it is forecasted that it will drop to roughly 52.5% by 2050. Additionally, the population of individuals aged above 65 started at around 5%, rose marginally to about 8% by 1990, before remaining unchanged from 1990 to 2010, then it increased dramatically to over 17.5% by 2020.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and data points from the graph, including an overview and specific details for each age group. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 0-14 starting at 45% instead of 40%, 15-64 starting at 40% instead of 55%) and minor omissions (e.g., the 65+ group's stability from 1990 to 2010 is mentioned but the 2010 value is slightly off). The structure is clear, and the language is generally appropriate. To improve, ensure data accuracy and consider including more precise figures from the visual description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. For instance, the transition between the overview and the detailed paragraphs could be smoother. Additionally, some sentences are a bit repetitive in structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and shows some range (e.g., 'witnessed an upward trend', 'dropped significantly', 'rose marginally'). However, there is room for more sophisticated and varied lexical choices. Some phrases are slightly informal or imprecise (e.g., 'heat a peak' should be 'reached a peak').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'heat a peak' instead of 'reached a peak', 'people who aged' instead of 'people aged'). While the overall meaning is clear, these errors detract from accuracy. A wider range of sentence structures would also enhance the score.

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