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Band 5+: Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, · describe what you enjoyed about the course · say how much cooking you've done since the course · suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear sir/ madam,

I would like to inform you that; when i came in your institude i enjoyed alot, your envirment was to comfortable and very friendly. I was enjoying cutting skills because i want to learn cutting skills it is very help full for cooking.

I learnd lots of skills in cooking itmes as you know that i learnd almost all recipie, but i feel very uncomfortable when I learn chinees recipies, please add some easy tricks and tips for easily learned hard recipes.I hope i will learn complete soon.

I prefer you please add fast food in your course beacuse this is very pouplur in our country, student want to learn easy itme and i know fast food is very easy to learn, if you will add easy items in your menu list student will take definatly admisson in your cookery school.

Your faithfully

Syed Ahmed Ali shah

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B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

learn: 5

skills: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and organized for a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. The ideas presented are not always smoothly connected, impacting the overall coherence.

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4.5

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, · describe what you enjoyed about the course · say how much cooking you’ve done since the course · suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

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