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Band 5+: Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, · describe what you enjoyed about the course · say how much cooking you've done since the course · suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Task 1.

Dear Mr or Mrs,

I am writing to inform you about your cookery school. One day I seen this school in new paper, there your cookery school very cheap and quality it was written. Subsequently I decided to booked to it two years ago. I learned cook made cake, biscuit, bread and others this course. My husband always had of me because I cannot make cake very well. However My husband again love me since I booked this course. I advice each one of women because many men like meal. So if you have a problem with your couple, you would learn cooking. That is meaning you should buy a course from this cookery shop.

I am very satisfied but I think you should add another course for example, plow, Somsa, Shurvo, the republic of Uzbekistan’s national meals, so if you add uzbek’s national meals, many uzbeks will book your cookery school. I hope you will come to Uzbekistan and I to teach how make uzbek’s national meals to you.

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Tom

Word Count: 175

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

cookery: 4

school: 4

course: 4

national: 3

meals: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the structure and clarity could be improved.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a logical flow and contains numerous grammatical errors, affecting coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is limited, and some words are used inappropriately. More precise and varied vocabulary is needed.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and understanding.

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Band 5+: Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, · describe what you enjoyed about the course · say how much cooking you've done since the course · suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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