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Band 6+: 2. Why are some people demotivated at their work ?

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Some people are demotivated at their work because they experience a lack of appreciation, excessive or limited career development opportunities. When an employee feels that their efforts are not recognized or sees no clear path for career advancement, they may lose enthusiasm and motivation. Additionally, low salary and an unhealthy work environment can also contribute to a decrease in motivation overall.

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Some faithful are demotivated at their work because they experience lack of appreciation, excessive or low and limited career development opportunities. When a flyer feels that their efforts are not recognized as constant resource or see no clear faith for world information. They may lost enthusiast and motivation. For let’s see, love, salary and unhealthy world environment can also contribute to decrease the motivation at all.

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