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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart illustrating the percentage of Australian men and women, divided by age groups, engaging in regular physical activity in 2010. It shows males aged 15-24 having the highest participation at 52.8%, with a steady decline to 45.1% in the 65 and over group. Females show a peak at 47.7% in the 45-54 age group, with the lowest at 43.3% in the 25-34 age group. Overall, male participation is consistently higher than female across all age groups.

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The bar char numerates the percentage of different demographics from Australian women and men who did regular excercises by 2010.

Overall, an female’s age group in percentage of physicial activities tends to fluctuate overtime while, male’s age group tend to face an incline in it’s ratio in Australia.

At first, women aged 15 to 24 had 47.7% of doing regular workouts. However as women are older, the more common it is for them to do planned activities. An example, women aged 25 till 34 years old are reported are 48.9%.

Additionally, the number gets even higher in ages 45 as the highest number recorded by 53.3%. This applies exclusively towards females that are not apart of the elderly as the number declines from 53% for ages 55 to 47.1% for ages over 65.

On the other hand, this pattern is the opposite for men. As it is more common for younger males from 15 to 24 to do physical activity more often as the highest number noted by 52.8%. Men aged 25 till 44 faced a significant decrease on doing activities regular to 39.5%, although ages 45 to over 65 experienced a increase ending by 46.7%.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The description of the data contains some incorrect values, and the overall structure could be improved for better coherence. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and organizing the information more logically, perhaps by comparing and contrasting the trends for men and women in separate paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is not always smooth. The introduction is brief but lacks a clear overview of the main trends. The body paragraphs attempt to describe the data for both men and women, but the transitions between age groups and genders are abrupt, making it difficult to follow the analysis. To improve coherence, use clearer topic sentences to introduce each paragraph's focus and transition words to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Consider grouping the data differently, perhaps by comparing men and women within each age group to highlight the differences more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice (e.g., "numerates," "excercises," "incline"). To enhance lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to data description and trends. For example, instead of "doing regular workouts," consider using "engaging in regular physical activity" or "participating in routine exercise." Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your vocabulary related to describing charts and graphs.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. These include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles (e.g., "an female's age group," "male's age group"). Sentence structure is also often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly and proofread carefully for errors in grammar and punctuation. Practice using different sentence types (simple, compound, complex) and pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and correct tense usage.

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