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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the number of hours worked per week by men and women in Australia.

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The image presents a bar chart illustrating the percentage distribution of hours worked per week by men and women in Australia across different ranges. For 0-10 hours, men at 5%, women at 8%. For 10-20 hours, men at 10%, women at 15%. For 30-50 hours, men at 45%, women at 35%. For 60-80 hours, men at 10%, women at 5%. For over 80 hours, both men and women at 5%.

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The bar chart compares on parcentage of male and female were weekly worked hours in Australia.

Overview, man were worked hours higher then women. significantly men were more likely to work in linger hours .while women werecommon in lower working hours .

looking at the details, around 45% men worked in 30 to 50 hours group, highest ratio among all the time catagory, comapre with 35% women worked in the catagory . also 60 to 80 working hours catagory were 30% men worked in the time priod, while only 18% of women worked in these hours. in the sametime, over 80 hours catagory where worked were male and female both in 10% .

However, women were top in short timing catagoty. 10 hours catagory were wprked male and female 5% and 15% respectly. also 10-20 hours group where female over 20% worked in the time , while male around 10% worked in the catagory.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hours: 10

worked: 9

catagory: 6

women: 5

female: 4

while: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and some irrelevant information, particularly given the prompt. The overview is acceptable, but the details contain some errors in the data. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting and focus on the key features as presented in the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The sentences are not well-connected, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and create a smoother flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains inaccuracies ('on parcentage,' 'linger hours,' 'comapre with'). There is an attempt to use comparative language, but it is not always accurate or effective. Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Pay attention to correct word usage and spelling. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word forms ('were worked,' 'man were,' 'women werecommon'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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