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Band 5+: The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart illustrates the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of the next year. We can see there are three shops. First of them is Mango Co. next shop is Jack and Jones Co. and other shops takes half procents of pie chart.

Let’s start from smaller to larger projects. Smallest one between of them it’s Mango Co. with twenty procents. Jack and Jones project is higher mere 5 percent or more precisely 30 percent. Other projects describes half percent of pie chart.

Overall the smallest project is Mango co with a fifth percent and the largest projects is a consolidation of other projects takes half percent. That’s all described about projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of the next year.

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projects: 4

mango: 3

other: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but includes some inaccuracies and lacks detail. The description of the market shares is basic and could benefit from more precise language and comparisons. The organization is somewhat repetitive. To improve, focus on providing more specific details and using more varied language to describe the data. Also, ensure the information presented is accurate and avoid repetition by structuring the report more effectively. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The introduction restates the prompt but doesn't provide an overview of the main trends. The body paragraphs are disjointed and lack clear topic sentences. The conclusion is repetitive and doesn't offer a strong summary. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences to introduce each paragraph, use transition words to connect ideas, and ensure that the conclusion summarizes the main points without simply repeating information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. For example, 'shops' is used instead of 'companies' or 'brands,' and 'takes' is used repeatedly. To improve lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to market share and business, and avoid repetition by using synonyms and paraphrasing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('there are three shops'), incorrect pluralization ('half procents'), and awkward phrasing ('higher mere 5 percent'). Sentence structure is also quite simple, with limited use of complex sentences. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and a variety of sentence structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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