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Band 4+: The chart below gives information on the numbers of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Skilled migrants to Australia, 2009-2012' with 4 occupation categories: Accountant, Cook, Software engineer, and Computer programmer. Each category has 4 bars representing different years with the following data: Accountant - 2009: 28 thousand workers, 2010: 22, 2011: 17, 2012: 18; Cook - 2009: 21, 2010: 17, 2011: 15, 2012: 16; Software engineer - 2009: 20, 2010: 19, 2011: 20, 2012: 19; Computer programmer - 2009: 17, 2010: 4, 2011: 2, 2012: 2. The y-axis is labeled 'In thousand workers' ranging from 0 to 30 in increments of 5.

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The bar chart demonstrates informationon the numbers of employees in differentoccupations who migrated to Australiabetween 2009 and 2012.

Overall, it is clear that accountantoccupations was taken first place. However,cook and software engineer took second place. Meanwhile, one of the last computer programmers.In 2009, Accountant was dominated with 20.000 migrants. However, cook and software engineer showed almost same result 17.000 and 18.000 workers. Computer programmers saw an upward trend, despite having the lowest migrant numbers, starting at 2.000 employees.Although, In 2010 Accountant reached a peak. It increased by 8.000 migrants compare to 2009. Moreover, cook

Meanwhile, in 2011 both software engineer and cook showed upward trend. Although,Accountant and Computer programmer demonstrated downward trend. In the last year only computer programmer increased by 3.000 migrants.but, Accountant, cook and software engineer decreased.

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engineer: 4

computer: 4

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the main trends in the bar chart, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks specific details. The organization is not very clear, and the language used is somewhat repetitive and imprecise. To improve, focus on providing accurate data, organizing the information more logically (e.g., by occupation or year), and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the main trends. The body paragraphs jump between years and occupations without a clear structure. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences. Consider grouping information by occupation or by year to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'was taken first place'). Use a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons more accurately. Paraphrase information from the chart more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence structure problems. These errors significantly impact clarity. Proofread carefully and focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Vary sentence structure to improve readability.

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