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The image compares diagrams from 1957 and 2007 of a local museum and surroundings. In 1957, features include a garden with numerous trees at the top, an entrance hall leading to a national history exhibition, a toilet, a local history room, and a storeroom. By 2007, changes include the addition of an education center and special exhibitions at the top, a museum shop, a reception area, and a cafe adjacent to the local history room. The entrance is repositioned, and a large car park replaces previous garden space on the right side, with fewer trees present overall.

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the map illustartes the changes in a small local museum and its surroundings between 1957 and 2007.

Overall, it is clear that Museum became more developed over the period, with several new facilities being added, while some natural areas were removed.

In 1957, in the centre of garden ,the town centre consisted mainly of residential buildings, with a small entrance hall located in the middle of the town. To the east of the garden, there was a museum store room, while the right of museum was local history room. In the north of garden there was a national history exhibition.In the south there are a road.

In 2007, significant changes had occurred. the trees was removed, while the entrance hall was replaced by car park. A new musuem shop was built to the west of the garden. the museum store room was replaced by cafe. In addition, the national history exhibition was split by two , special exhibition and education center.

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garden: 4

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the 1957 layout is somewhat unclear and lacks specific details. The description of the changes in 2007 is also not entirely accurate. To improve, focus on providing more precise descriptions of the locations and changes, and ensure all key features are mentioned.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the structure could be improved for better flow. The description of the museum's layout in both years lacks clear transitions and connections between the different areas. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and guide the reader through the changes. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to group related information and highlight key changes.

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The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but there is limited range and some inaccuracies. The report relies on basic descriptive language and could benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the changes and features of the museum. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'replaced,' try synonyms like 'converted,' 'transformed,' or 'redeveloped.' Also, ensure correct spelling and word choice throughout the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('illustartes' instead of 'illustrates'), subject-verb agreement issues ('the trees was removed'), and article usage problems ('a new musuem shop'). These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules, including verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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