Band 6+: Why do people buy things that are not necessary?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a reasonable explanation. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons with more specific examples or exploring the psychological factors in greater depth. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is generally coherent, but there's a slight pause and some awkward phrasing at the beginning ('While there are some people just pursue trends and while others find the essence of comfort and in buying things'). Rephrasing the initial part of the sentence would improve fluency. Try to avoid starting with 'while' twice in the same sentence.

The vocabulary is adequate and relevant ('pursue trends,' 'essence of comfort,' 'reduce stress'). However, using more precise or varied vocabulary could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'feel better,' consider using 'alleviate anxiety' or 'experience a sense of gratification.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there's a minor issue with the initial sentence structure. The phrase 'essence of comfort and in buying things' is slightly awkward. Rephrasing to 'find comfort in buying things' improves grammatical accuracy and clarity. Pay attention to prepositions and sentence structure for better accuracy.