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Band 5+: The graph below shows information about the total oil consumption of four major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a graph of oil use of major consumers from 2009 to 2030, with US (solid blue line) starting around 9 million B/D, China (green dashed line) starting at 4 million B/D, Western Europe and Japan (red dotted line) at 6 million B/D, and Middle East (purple dot-dash line) around 2 million B/D. All lines show a downward trend, with US dropping to around 5 million B/D by 2030, China and Western Europe and Japan both around 3 million B/D, and Middle East at 1 million B/D.

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This graph shows the usage of oil in US,China,Middle East and Western Europe and Japan from year 2009 to year 2030.

From 2009 to 2015,consumers in the US utilized more oil than other countries, consuming 10 millions of barrels per day,whereas the oil consumption in the Western Europe and Japan was only 4 millions of barrels.Subsequently, the usage of oil in China and Middle East has experienced the same trends.Both commenced at similar quantities with 2 millions of barrels and saw a modest growth.

After 2015,the US oil usage sharply fell to nearly 6 million barrels and is expected to continue falling to approximately 4 millions of barrels by 2030,while the Western Europe and Japan are predicted to decline to 2 millions of barrels.Meanwhile,the Middle East and China are anticipated to increase steadily and reach to nearly 3 millions of barrels until the end of the period.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

millions: 6

barrels: 5

usage: 3

western: 3

europe: 3

japan: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in oil consumption for the four regions, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the initial consumption for Western Europe and Japan is misstated. Also, the Middle East and China are not anticipated to increase steadily. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and pay closer attention to the specific trends for each region. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview of the oil consumption trends, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. Consider grouping information more thematically, such as discussing the initial consumption levels, then the trends of increase or decrease, and finally the projected consumption levels. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing the trends in the graph, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Instead of repeatedly using 'usage' or 'consumption,' try incorporating synonyms like 'expenditure,' 'utilization,' or 'demand.' Also, consider using more specific language to describe the changes, such as 'plummeted,' 'fluctuated,' or 'plateaued,' where appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'millions of barrels' is generally preferred over 'millions of barrels.' Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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