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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts Garlson with a population of 65,000; spatial elements include a countryside, a town center with no traffic zone, housing areas, and industrial sections, alongside railway lines and main roads; distances to neighboring locations are 12 km to Hindon with a population of 10,000, 16 km to Branson with a population of 15,000, and 25 km to Cranston with a population of 29,000, with segments S1 and S2 marked on the map.

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Because there is two possible sites for the supermarket at the town of Garlsdon with 65,000 population based on the map, then:

S2 is the most possible from the location, it close to the railway and the Town Centre with no traffic zone make more approachable. The perfect idea to build a new supermarket based on their daily needs, the position nearest to the two largest population which is Bransdon and Cransdon with total population 44,000 out of 65,000 peoples, S2 became the farest location from two area but the most strategic based on the population and it is near the Housing Area too.

S1 is good because it is only 12 km to Hindon population with total 10,000 peoples but it will never profitable than S2 and ended up build at the countryside that makes peoples from Bransdon and Cransdon too lazy to come only for groceries at the supermarket

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by discussing the two possible sites for the supermarket. However, it includes some irrelevant information (e.g., repeating the population of Garlsdon) and lacks a clear, organized structure. The comparisons between the sites are somewhat superficial and could be more detailed. To improve, focus on providing a more structured overview, highlighting the key features of each site in relation to the town's infrastructure and population distribution, and making more specific and relevant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the writing jumps between different points without clear transitions. Paragraphing is weak, and the overall structure makes it difficult to follow the argument. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'furthermore') to link ideas and improve the flow of your writing. Organize your report into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the map. For example, one paragraph could describe the location of S1, another the location of S2, and a third could compare and contrast the two sites.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of specific vocabulary related to map descriptions or spatial relationships. Expand your vocabulary by learning synonyms and more precise terms to describe locations, distances, and relationships between different areas on the map. Use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the advantages and disadvantages of each site.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the writing. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofread your work carefully to identify and correct grammatical errors.

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