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Band 6+: The plans below Show a building before and after remodelling. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates the layout transformation from "Community Art Centre" to "Community Art and Audio Centre (after remodelling)" displaying changes in room allocation and usage. Initially, the space comprises Gallery 1, Gallery 2, Art Studio, Kitchen, Parking, and Toilets. Post-remodelling, Gallery 1, Gallery 2 remain alongside new spaces: Recording Studio (To rent), Art Studio (To rent), Café, Toilets, and Outdoor Exhibition Space labeled with designated tables, chairs, and plants, while Parking is removed (No parking).

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The plan illustrate tha changes that have taken place at Community art centre before and after remodeling.

Overall, the station has undergone significant development. While the second gallery have largely remained in the same positions, many new facilities have been added, and some existing ones have been relocated.

First community art center had a relatively simple layout. The first gallery were located on the left side of the plan, to the lower art studio. To the lower right of the second gallery, there was a small servise area containing a kitchen and a toilets.

After remodeling, the community art and audio centre appears to be more modern and better equipped.To the higher left side recording studio hve been constructed. Additionally, a large Outdoor Exhibition Space has been added on the right side. Meanwhile, toilets and first gallery have been relocated to the left side of the Exhibition, between them the cafe has been built.

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community: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some key changes but lacks detail and accuracy in describing the transformations. The organization is somewhat clear, but the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about the changes, ensuring accurate descriptions, and proofreading for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it slightly difficult to follow the changes. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. The report relies on simpler terms and could benefit from incorporating more specific vocabulary related to architectural changes and spatial descriptions. For example, instead of 'significant development,' consider using 'substantial transformation' or 'extensive renovation.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues ('the plan illustrate,' 'the second gallery have') and incorrect article usage ('the station') are present. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there's limited use of complex sentence structures. Focus on proofreading for basic grammatical errors and expanding the range of sentence structures to enhance accuracy and sophistication.

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