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Band 5+: The plans below Show a building before and after remodelling. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates the layout transformation from "Community Art Centre" to "Community Art and Audio Centre (after remodelling)" displaying changes in room allocation and usage. Initially, the space comprises Gallery 1, Gallery 2, Art Studio, Kitchen, Parking, and Toilets. Post-remodelling, Gallery 1, Gallery 2 remain alongside new spaces: Recording Studio (To rent), Art Studio (To rent), Café, Toilets, and Outdoor Exhibition Space labeled with designated tables, chairs, and plants, while Parking is removed (No parking).

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The diagram illustrates a building before and after rebuilding.

Overall, while the gallery 2 remained unchanged the parking was done away with and an outdoor exhibition space was introduced.

Prior the redesigning, the parking, kitchen and toilets occupied the right and side with the kitchen and the toilets at the bottom, whereas gallery 1 and art studio covered the left side. Gallery 2 was stationed in the central part.

Following the restructuring, parking was replaced by an outdoor exhibition space and the kitchen by a cafe. Notably, The art studio remained untouched and the position of gallery 1 replaced with a recording studio with gallery 1 moved to the top right side.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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gallery: 5

parking: 3

kitchen: 3

studio: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main changes between the two building layouts. The overview is clear, and the body paragraphs describe the key differences. However, there could be more specific details and comparisons to enhance the response. For improvement, focus on providing more precise information about the changes and ensuring a smoother flow between the paragraphs. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a reasonable overview of the changes. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping changes thematically or spatially to enhance coherence. For example, discuss all additions together, then all removals, and finally any relocations or modifications. The use of cohesive devices could also be more varied and natural.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for describing the main changes, but there's room for improvement. Try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to building layouts and spatial descriptions. For instance, instead of 'stationed,' consider 'located' or 'situated.' Also, vary your word choices to avoid repetition (e.g., instead of always using 'replaced,' use 'converted,' 'transformed,' or 'redeveloped').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct verb tense usage. Pay close attention to articles (a/an/the) and prepositions. Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors. For example, 'Prior the redesigning' should be 'Prior to the redesign' and 'The art studio remained untouched' could be improved for better flow.

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