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Band 5+: The chart below shows Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

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The image displays a line graph showing the percentage of Japan's population by three age groups from 1960 with a forecast to 2040. For the 0-14 age group, the percentages were: 1960 (30%), 1970 (35%), 1980 (28%), 1990 (29%), 2000 (20%), 2010 (18%), 2020 (15%), 2030 (12%), and 2040 (10%). For the 25-64 age group, the figures were: 1960 (65%), 1970 (70%), 1980 (68%), 1990 (70%), 2000 (68%), 2010 (65%), 2020 (60%), 2030 (55%), and 2040 (57%). For the 65+ age group, the population percentages were: 1960 (5%), 1970 (5%), 1980 (10%), 1990 (11%), 2000 (15%), 2010 (25%), 2020 (30%), 2030 (30%), and 2040 (35%).

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The line graph gives information about population by different group age in Japan over the period from 1960 to 2040. The data is peresented form of line graph.

Overall, it is clear that 25 to 56 age group was the highest while, the 65+ age group was the lowest in 1960. It is also noticeable that 0 to 14 age group showed a decreasing trend. Moreover, there were significant difference between 25 to 64 age group and 0 to 14 age group.

Looking at the details, 65+ age group started at around 3% population and than increased to about 38%. In addition, 25 to 64 age group stood that approximately 65% population in the beginning and showed a gradual change. In contrast, 0 to 14 age group repidly decreased 10% population.

Furthermore, 65+ age group reached a peak of about 37% population, whereas 25 to 64 age group dropped around 58% population. Similarly, 0 to 14 age group lower than 65+ age group throughout the period. Overall, 25 to 64 age group had greater figuer compared to 65+ age group in 2040.

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group: 14

population: 5

about: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data points. The writing is not always clear, and there are grammatical errors. To improve, focus on providing more precise data from the graph, ensuring accuracy, and refining sentence structure and grammar.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas is not always smooth. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For instance, the connections between the overall trends and the detailed descriptions are not always clear. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to guide the reader through the data. The introduction and conclusion are present but could be more effective in summarizing the key trends and providing a clearer overview.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for describing the graph, but there is room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit awkward (e.g., "peresented form of line graph"). Try to use more specific and sophisticated vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., "fluctuated," "plateaued," "experienced a surge"). Also, ensure that the vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately within the context. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common issues include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement problems, and misuse of prepositions. For example, "The data is peresented form of line graph" should be "The data is presented in the form of a line graph." Pay close attention to sentence structure and punctuation to improve accuracy. Review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully to minimize errors.

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