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Band 5+: In what ways might the arts contribute to solving societal problems, and what limitations might they face?

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My opinion about this is that art and creativity can solve a lot of problems in the world and society because people can show you these problems through beautiful art. Nothing works like art to solve a problem that has an influence on people. Maybe this art or creativity can contribute to you, and you can want to, I don't know. That's all. For example, a poster where we write, like, we don't have this... this... this...

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My opinion about this is that arts and gravity people can solve a lot of problems in the world and social because there’s people can show you this problem in art that’s beautiful because nothing works can solve a problem which had influence on people. Maybe this arts or gravity can contribute to you and you can be wants to, I don’t know. that’s all that’s probably to… for example, poster with… poster, poster where we’re right, like, we don’t have this… this… this…

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