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Band 7+: some people argue whether academic performance should focus on preparing students for employment while others believe that education should focus on personal development. give your opinion

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Some people contend that academic performance should focus on preparing students for employment, while others argue that it should pay attention to personal development. I believe education should focus on personal development. Both views will be discussed in this essay.

Some people believe that education should focus on preparing students for their future field for numerous reasons. One of the key reasons could be the high salary that comes with professional knowledge and proper training. For example, if education focuses on employment skills, students can more easily apply for jobs and achieve success in their fields. As a result, they can earn a higher salary. Another important reason is that students can learn skills such as problem-solving, communication, and critical thinking, which are essential in the workplace.

On the other hand, I believe that personal development should be the main goal of education. This is because education is not only about getting a job but also about shaping a person’s character and values. For instance, students who develop emotional intelligence, creativity, and independence can adapt better to different life situations. Moreover, personal development helps individuals become more confident and responsible members of society, not just employees.

In conclusion, while job preparation is important, I strongly believe that personal development should be the main focus of education, as it prepares students for life in a broader sense.

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