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Band 8+: You want to join a course. Write a letter: ask about the course ask about price ask about schedule

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Dear David,

I am writing to ask about the football coaching course.

First, I would like to learn this profession because I enjoy working with children and sports. I would like to ask about the topics covered in the course, as I prefer to learn about coaching children rather than professional football.

I would also like to know the price of the course, as I do not have a lot of money at the moment. Is it possible to pay in installments?

In addition, I would like to know the schedule because I work every day. I go to work at 8:00 am and return at 8:00 pm, so I prefer classes in the evening or on weekends.

Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.

Kind regards,

Lautaro

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