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Band 6+: The bar chart shows the percentage of the world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a bar chart comparing percentages of the total world population in India, China, USA, and Japan for years 1950, 2003, and projected for 2050: India shows ~15%, 17%, and 19% respectively; China indicates ~23%, 20%, and 15% respectively; USA demonstrates ~7%, ~5%, and consistent ~5% respectively; Japan represents ~4%, ~3%, and ~1% respectively.

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This bar chat highlights the percentage of the world population in 4 different countries thoughout the years 1950, and 2003, giving estimated calculations for the following 100 years. As expected India and China, nations whom are under development, took the lead with the highest percentage compared to the developed states such as USA and Japan.

Over the centuary, the percentage of the total population has remarkably increased in India from 15% in 1950 to almost 19%. At this rate, this nation, placed next to the other states, will cover the highest fraction of people in their land.

On the other hand, China’s proportions dramatically decreased from 23% in 1950 to 20% in 2003 and it is predicted to reach about 15% by the end of 2050. This noticeable change will accord the country the possibility of reaching both USA and Japan’s low percentages which is respectively about 6% in 1950 and contantly 5% in both 2003 till 2050, and less than 5% in 1950 to 1% in 2050

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The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., USA's percentages). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and pay attention to the specific years mentioned in the task.

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The report generally presents a clear overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping information by country or trend (increase/decrease) to enhance coherence. The final sentence is quite long and complex, making it difficult to follow. Breaking it down into shorter sentences would improve readability.

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The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. For instance, instead of 'took the lead,' consider using 'accounted for the largest proportion.' Explore synonyms for words like 'percentage,' 'dramatically,' and 'noticeable' to demonstrate a wider range. Also, 'centuary' is misspelled and should be 'century'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. 'This bar chat' should be 'This bar chart.' 'thoughout' should be 'throughout'. 'nations whom are under development' should be 'nations that are under development' or 'developing nations'. 'Over the centuary' should be 'Over the century'. 'accord the country the possibility' is awkward; consider 'allow the country to reach'. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions. Proofreading carefully before submission can help catch these errors.

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