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Band 6+: The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows annual expenditures for cell phone services and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010; in 2001, cell phone services were around $200 while residential phone services were approximately $700; cell phone expenditures increased steadily, surpassing residential services around 2006-2007; by 2010, cell phone service costs reached near $760, and residential service costs dropped to about $330.

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The given chart illustrates the anual money spending tendecy on services of cell phones, marked with the red line and residential phones, represented in green, from 2001 to 2010.

For starters, in the first analized year it is clearly visible that the difference between residential and cell phones services si almost 500 dollers. Residential phones services are decreasing with 50 dollars during one year and another 100 dollars between 2002 and 2006, where it matches the cell phone services value and going straight to an number of 400 per year until 2010, losing in 10 years almost a half of the statistics numbers.

Furthermore, the cell phone services are undergoing a significant constant growth by raising from a number of 200 to 800 dollars between 2001 and 2010. On the other hand the landline phones undergo an opposing trend constantly dropping from 700 to 430

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phones: 5

residential: 3

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dollars: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the graph, noting the initial difference, the crossover point, and the overall trends for both cell phone and residential phone expenditures. To improve, focus on providing more precise data points and specific years to strengthen the analysis. Also, ensure consistent and accurate language use throughout the report. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is somewhat coherent, but the organization could be improved. The introduction is adequate, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Consider grouping information more logically, perhaps by discussing the overall trends first and then highlighting specific data points. The flow of ideas could be smoother with better use of cohesive devices.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there are some instances of imprecise word choice ('anual', 'tendesy', 'si', 'dollers'). Expanding your range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'going straight to a number of 400', you could use phrases like 'declining steadily to approximately 400'. Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Residential phones services are decreasing' should be 'Residential phone services decreased' or 'were decreasing'. 'losing in 10 years almost a half of the statistics numbers' is also grammatically incorrect and unclear. Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures accurately.

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