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Band 4+: The chart below shows the percentage of children in a European country who took part in four kinds of activities in 2009

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The image displays a bar chart titled 'The percentage of children in four kinds of activities, 2009', showing data for age groups 5-8, 9-11, and 12-15 years old. Participation percentages were as follows: Watch TV - 5-8 years (97%), 9-11 years (82%), 12-15 years (80%); Read comics - 5-8 years (62%), 9-11 years (65%), 12-15 years (65%); Play video games - 5-8 years (60%), 9-11 years (57%), 12-15 years (40%); and Ride bikes - 5-8 years (67%), 9-11 years (60%), 12-15 years (82%).

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The given bar chart illustrates the ratio of various age groups childrens parts four activities namely( watch tv, read comics, play video games, and ride bikes) in european country in the year 2009.

It is evident from the graph that among all pupils more watch tv than other three activities. In the age group 5-8 years old, approximately 97% had participated that compititon, while around 76% of children was 9-11 years, and 12-115 years old. Intrestingly, nearly 60% of adults was 5-8 years groups participated that compititon, wheras this ratio slightly rose in other two groups.

In terms of play video games, the highest 5-8 years old people participated, which was around read comics percentage, but in other two groups participated ratio decreased slightly about 55% and 40% respectively. however, ride bikes showed some fluctuation. 5-8 years children, nearly 65% participated, but this ratio dropped in next age group around 60%, and again peak about 77% in 12-15 years old people.

Overall, it can be said that the more 5-8 years old children intrested to watch tv, while 9-11 years old children participated eaqually same ratio in all compititon. Also, 12-15 years old childrens intrested to participated in ride bikes compititon.

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years: 10

participated: 7

ratio: 5

compititon: 4

children: 4

groups: 3

watch: 3

other: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by mentioning all four activities and the different age groups. However, there are several issues with data accuracy and clarity. The report frequently uses the word 'competition' to describe activities, which is an inappropriate interpretation of the data. There are also significant inaccuracies in the reported figures (e.g., referring to children as 'adults' and misstating percentages). To improve, focus on using precise vocabulary to describe trends and ensure that the data points extracted from the chart are reported accurately. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to ensure the comparisons between age groups are clear and logical.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is frequently interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'In terms of', 'Overall', 'Interestingly'), they are often used incorrectly or do not help the reader follow the data smoothly. To improve, focus on using clearer transition signals and ensure that each paragraph has a single, clear focus. Avoid jumping between different data points within a single sentence without clear logical links.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and often inaccurate. There are several instances of word misuse, such as calling children 'adults' or referring to activities as 'competitions'. Additionally, there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'compititon', 'intrested', 'eaqually'). To improve, work on building a bank of academic synonyms for describing trends (e.g., 'increased', 'decreased', 'remained stable') and ensure you are using the correct terminology for the subject matter (e.g., 'participation rates' instead of 'ratio of parts').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'childrens parts', 'children was'), sentence structure, and the use of prepositions. Many sentences are fragmented or run-on, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning. I recommend focusing on basic sentence structures (Subject + Verb + Object) and practicing the correct use of plural nouns and verb tenses before attempting more complex structures.

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