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Band 5+: the diagram below shows the development of a small fishing village and its sorruonding area into a large tourist resort

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The image displays two diagrams of an area in 1974 and 2004. In 1974, the fishing village had a population of 12,000; its landscape featured a harbour, boats on the sea, a coastal fishing village, and hills with woodland, villages, areas for sheep & goats, and olive groves. In 2004, the resort had a population of 80,000 and 50,000 tourist beds; the area included hotels along the beach, a designated original village site, homes for locals, farmland for hotel fruit and vegetables, a road, a golf course, and a village with tourist shops in the hills.

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The two landscape pictures show transformation of a village to a development city between 1974 to recent.

Overall, the village has been masively massively transformed from a food-producing area to a tourist destination.

In 1974, the population of the village are 12.000. Firstly, all areas were used as a recidential areas and a food production areas. In highland areas, around the hill was used by farmers to raising livestocks such as sheeps and goats. In addition, the farmers were built a villages in the hills. Next, There was an olive grove in the hill beside a woodland. In the beach, as we can see, there was a fishing village with a harbour.

Recently, the village has been developed to a tourist destination and the population has increased to 80.000 and 50.000 for tourist beds. Next, all areas have beed repurposed to adapt tourism needs. In highland areas, the livestock has been demolished and a road has been built. The olive grove has been replaced to farmland and this has been provide fruit and vegetable for hotels. The woodland has been cleared to built a golf course. Lastly, the fishing village has been maintened, but the harbour has been demolished.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

village: 6

areas: 6

tourist: 3

built: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by highlighting the key transformations from a fishing village to a tourist resort. It provides a clear overview and covers the main changes in both the population and the land use. To improve, ensure more precise use of grammatical structures (e.g., subject-verb agreement and tense consistency) and avoid repetitive sentence structures. While the description of the changes is accurate based on the provided visual information, refining the vocabulary used to describe transitions would enhance the overall quality.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, moving from the initial state to the transformed state. However, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat repetitive and mechanical (e.g., 'Firstly', 'Next', 'In addition', 'Next', 'Lastly'). To improve, try to use more sophisticated linking phrases that show relationships between ideas rather than just listing them. Some transitions feel abrupt, and the paragraphing could be more effectively used to group related changes together rather than just separating by time periods.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient to convey the main ideas, but there is a lack of variety and precision. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'masively', 'recidential', 'livestocks', 'maintened') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'development city' instead of 'tourist resort', 'demolished' used for livestock). To reach a higher band, aim for more precise academic vocabulary related to change and development, such as 'converted', 'expanded', 'replaced', or 'transformed'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the flow of reading. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'population... are'), tense consistency, and passive voice construction (e.g., 'the farmers were built a villages', 'has been provide'). Additionally, there are errors in preposition usage and article usage. Focus on mastering the passive voice for describing processes and ensuring that your verb tenses correctly reflect the timeline (past for 1974 and present perfect for the changes leading to 2004).

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