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Band 6+: the two maps below show the development of a city, Wonderland city, over time from 1995 to the present.

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The image contains two maps depicting Wonderland City from 1995 to the present; in 1995, there is a forest park above a farmland in the northeast, housing in the northwest, a hotel near the center, a shop, fish market, fishing port, and cafe along the coastline in the south, with farmland replaced by a golf course and tennis area in the present, additional housing added beside the original, restaurant replacing the shop, apartments replacing the fish market and fishing port, and a car park added near the hotel.

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The maps give information about the arrangement of some infrastructure in a specific town from 1995 to the present.

Overall, there are significant changes in the layout of this area. In detail, many shops and markets were built, meeting residents’ demand. Moreover, natural land has disappeared for other purposes.

Looking first in the northern site, there is a long road which has divided the town into two parts. Until now, along the road, many houses still remained nearly unchanged compared to the past, which provide more accommodation for citizens. To the north east of the town, a large land, including farmland and a forest park for agriculture purposes in 1995. However, today, they have been merged into a sports area, like tennis courts or golf.

Turning to the south, shops and fish markets in the past have made place for a large number of restaurants and apartments, making this place more entertainment and settlement. Near the coast in the southern part, the addition of a fishing harbor makes this place more busy and active with many trade activities. In addition, a car park has been built now for parking reasons, while a hotel and a cafe in the opposite site remain unchanged in the southeast.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes shown in the maps and provides a clear overview of the transformation. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data interpretation that affect the task achievement. For instance, the report mentions the addition of a fishing harbor, whereas the visual description suggests the fishing port was replaced by apartments. Additionally, some grammatical structures and word choices (e.g., 'made place for', 'in the opposite site') are slightly awkward. To improve, ensure a more precise comparison of what was removed versus what was added, and focus on using more accurate directional language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs organized by location. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by awkward phrasing. For instance, the transition between describing the road and the housing could be smoother. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices and ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next to avoid a 'choppy' feel.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate to convey the main ideas, but there is a lack of sophistication and precision. Some word choices are slightly unnatural, such as 'making this place more entertainment and settlement' or 'for parking reasons.' Instead of using repetitive or simple phrasing, try to use more academic collocations, such as 'urban development,' 'residential areas,' or 'commercial facilities.' Additionally, ensure that the words used are the correct part of speech (e.g., using 'entertainment hub' instead of 'more entertainment').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that impact the clarity of the report. There are incomplete sentences (sentence fragments), such as 'To the north east of the town, a large land, including farmland and a forest park for agriculture purposes in 1995.' This sentence lacks a main verb. There are also issues with tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. To improve, focus on constructing complete complex sentences and carefully checking that your verb tenses align with the time periods being described (past vs. present).

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