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Band 5+: The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains three pie charts for 1988, 1998, and 2008, showing distributions for four accommodation types. In 1988, the values were: Staying with family 52, Rented apartment 7, Camping 26, and Hotels 15. For 1998, the data was: Staying with family 54, Rented apartment 11, Camping 13, and Hotels 22. In 2008, the figures were: Staying with family 44, Rented apartment 22, Camping 12, and Hotels 22.

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The pie chart compare the proportions of using four categories of housing by travelers across three different years – 1988, 1998, and 2008.

During three distinct years staying with family was the most widespread type of accomodation. Sice 1988 to 1998 this optio had been slight similar 52% to 54%. However, in 2008 it had steadily decreased, reaching 44%. Meanwhile, renting on apartment was the lowest option during te period from 1988 to 1998. In 1988, this opyion was 7%, and slightly increased in 1998 to 11%. While this option rose significantly in 2008, reaching 22% which was several times higher.

In 1988, the choice of camping was a popular options after Staying with family, acounting for 26%. However, from 1998 to 2008 it declined sharply to 13%, and remained relatively stable ovr this period, decreasing by only one percent up to 2008. At the beginnig, the proportion of visitors choosing hotels was 15% during the period of 1988. However, for the period from 1998 to 2008 it rapidly rose to 22% and stayed stable over these periods.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons between the three years. The overview is present, and the key features of each accommodation type are highlighted. To improve, ensure that the data trends are described with more precision; for example, the term 'steadily decreased' for a single drop between 1998 and 2008 is slightly inaccurate. Additionally, while the data reporting is sufficient, focusing on more varied comparative structures would enhance the overall quality of the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure by grouping information, but the progression is occasionally hindered by mechanical errors and awkward phrasing. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Meanwhile', 'However'), some transitions feel abrupt. To improve, focus on smoother transitions between sentences and ensure that your paragraphing clearly separates different trends or categories of data. Avoid repetitive sentence structures to help the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of terms to describe trends (e.g., 'declined sharply', 'rose significantly'), but frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'accomodation', 'Sice', 'optio', 'opyion', 'acounting', 'beginnig') and word choice inaccuracies (e.g., 'renting on apartment') significantly impact the quality. To reach a higher band, you must improve spelling accuracy and ensure that the vocabulary used is precise and natural in a formal academic context. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The pie chart compare'), tense usage (e.g., 'had been slight similar'), and prepositional errors. Pay close attention to verb tenses when describing historical data and ensure that your sentence constructions are grammatically sound to avoid distracting the reader.

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