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Band 7+: The graph and table compare the number of international tourist arrivals in five regions between 1990 and 2020, while the latter gives information about tourism in France and Australia in 2020.

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The image details international tourist arrivals by region from 1990 to 2020 and tourism data for France and Australia in 2020. International tourist arrivals worldwide by region (in millions) for the years 1990, 1995, 2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, and 2020 were respectively: for Europe, approximately 400, 480, 550, 620, 760, 930, and 1100; for Asia Pacific, approximately 140, 200, 270, 380, 540, 700, and 840; for Americas, approximately 180, 220, 260, 320, 450, 510, and 570; for Africa, approximately 20, 30, 40, 50, 60, 70, and 80; and for the Middle East, approximately 20, 30, 45, 55, 80, 100, and 110. The table for 2020 shows that France had a population of 67 million, 89.4 million inbound tourist arrivals, 60.7 billion US$ in international tourist receipts, and tourism contributed 7.8% to its GDP. Australia had a population of 25 million, 15.3 million inbound tourist arrivals, 45.1 billion US$ in receipts, and tourism comprised 8.6% of its GDP.

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The line and table graph compare the number of international tourist arrivals in five regions between 1990 and 2020, while the latter gives information about tourism in France and Australia in 2020.

Overall, the number of international tourists increased in most regions, with Europe being the most pivotal destination. In addition, France visited far more tourists than Australia, although tourism contributed a higher percentage to Australia’s GDP.

Looking at the graph, Europe constantly attracted the highest number of visitors. In 1990, arrivals in Europe were at 400 million, with this figure rising steadily to over 1,100 million by 2020. The Asia Pacific and the Americas also underwent growth, with specific figures of approximately 150 million and 110 million in 1990. By 2020, the Asia Pacific grew significantly, with dramatic peaking at 800 million, in contrast to Africa and the Middle East, which dropped to very low levels at around 100 million.

Turning to the table, France had a larger population of 67 million and received 89.4 million tourists. In terms of income, with the figures for France’s tourist receipts reaching 60.7 billion dollars, while the sales in Australia stood at 45.1 billion dollars. However, tourism accounted for 8.6% of Australia’s economy, whereas France followed a downward trajectory of only 7.8%.

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france: 4

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australia: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task and provides a clear overview of the main trends. The comparison between the two countries in the table is well-handled. However, there are some inaccuracies in data interpretation that affect the precision of the report. For instance, the report states that Africa and the Middle East 'dropped' to low levels, whereas the data indicates they actually grew, albeit at a slower rate than other regions. Additionally, describing France's GDP contribution as following a 'downward trajectory' is an incorrect use of trend language, as the data represents a single point in time (2020) rather than a change over time. To improve, ensure that trend vocabulary (e.g., 'increase', 'decrease', 'trajectory') is only used when describing changes over a period, and double-check that growth is not misidentified as a decline.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'Looking at the graph', and 'Turning to the table' helps guide the reader. However, some transitions within sentences could be smoother. For instance, the connection between the population and tourist arrivals in the final paragraph feels a bit abrupt. To improve, ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next by using more sophisticated linking words or subordinating conjunctions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate and covers the necessary aspects of the task. You have used some good descriptive terms such as 'pivotal destination', 'underwent growth', and 'accounted for'. However, there are some instances of imprecise word choice. For example, 'France visited far more tourists' is semantically incorrect (it should be 'France received far more tourists') and 'dramatic peaking' is slightly awkward. Aim for more precise collocations and ensure that the subject-verb relationship in your descriptions is accurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical issues that affect the clarity and professionalism of the writing. Specifically, there are issues with sentence fragments (e.g., 'In terms of income, with the figures for France's tourist receipts reaching 60.7 billion dollars, while the sales in Australia stood at 45.1 billion dollars' is not a complete sentence) and incorrect phrasing (e.g., 'France followed a downward trajectory of only 7.8%' implies a change over time, which is not supported by the static data in the table). Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that your descriptions of trends match the nature of the data provided.

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