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Band 4+: While some people think that children will be punished if they have a bad behavior, some of them agree that children will be rewarded when they have a good behavior.

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While some people think that children will be punished if they have a bad behavior, some of them agree that children will be rewarded when they have a good behavior. In my opinion children make some mistakes by bad behavior parents should be careful and they should be punished whenever they do good things parents need to praise them and also they should be rewarded. There are a number of reasons, first upbringing and secondly strict attitude in order to be children good person in the future.

On the one hand, there are a number of reasons for rewarding children if they make a good works. First of all they become motivate after rewarding, they have desire to work continuously, whenever with parents encouraging they become like a lion, children can win in every difficulties even life challenges. Moreover, they can destroy big mountains with motivation, with parents attention they can achieve their goals if parents do not praise them their desire will become worth. Also, lack of motivation lead children to lose their aims. Therefore it is crucial to give rewards to children with much praises.

On the other hand, our children become bad people due to several reasons. Firstly, parents give only praises to children, they will not punish when children make mistakes or parents do not pay attention to children’s bad behavior after all lack of attention by parents lead children to become bad people. Thereby, parents need to punish if children make mistakes.

To conclude, while some people argue children should praised by parents if they achieve something and some of them think children need to punish when they make bad things. In my view both of them are important rewards and punish but everything should be equal.

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