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Band 5+: The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays car expenditure data (in millions of USD) from 1995 to 2005 across four Asian countries: China shows values of 70, 73, 74, 82, and 95; Vietnam's figures are 40, 48, 52, 57, and 61; Thailand records 20, 21, 32, 45, and 55; Indonesia presents 60, 60, 64, 69, and 70 for the respective years of 1995, 1997, 1999, 2003, and 2005.

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The line graph compares the amount of money that was allocated for cars in four Asian countries namely China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from 1995 to 2005.

Overall, China and Thailand fluctuated over the period. In contrast, Vietnam increased gradually. Whereas Indonesia started by a stable rise and surge dramatically in 2000 thereafter.

In 1995, China recorded the highest figures at 80 million and experienced a small swing up to 2005. Vietnam and Thailand started with figures of 50 and 55 respectively, but they reached the same point at around 59 million in 1997. However, after 1997 Vietnam increased progressively until the end of the period.

By 1999, Thailand had a slight decrease, making it in the third position; higher than Indonesia. But, in 2003, Indonesia increased dramatically, surpassed Thailand accounted for 55 Millions, and then increased progressively by the end of the period, stood at the point approximately at 70 million

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thailand: 5

vietnam: 4

indonesia: 4

increased: 4

china: 3

million: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies in data reporting and trends that conflict with the provided visual description. For instance, the report describes Thailand and Vietnam starting at 50 and 55 million, whereas the data indicates they were lower. Additionally, the description of Indonesia's trend as a 'dramatic surge' contradicts the more gradual increase shown in the data. To improve, ensure that the trends described (e.g., 'fluctuated' vs 'increased') accurately reflect the direction of the lines in the graph, and double-check that the numerical values cited match the visual information provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat fragmented. While there is an attempt at an overview and body paragraphs, the use of cohesive devices is often incorrect. For example, starting sentences with 'Whereas' or 'But' in this manner creates sentence fragments rather than cohesive links. To improve, ensure that subordinating conjunctions (like 'whereas') are used to connect two clauses within a single sentence, rather than starting a new sentence with them. Additionally, the logical flow between sentences needs to be smoother to allow the reader to follow the trends without interruption.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used to describe trends is somewhat repetitive and occasionally used inaccurately. Terms like 'small swing' or 'stable rise and surge dramatically' are slightly awkward in a formal academic context. Try to use more precise academic collocations, such as 'experienced a slight increase,' 'remained relatively stable,' or 'witnessed a significant upward trend.' Be careful with word forms; for instance, 'surpassed Thailand accounted for' is ungrammatical and makes the lexical choice unclear.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that hinder the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Indonesia... surge' should be 'surged'), tense consistency, and sentence structure. Many sentences are either fragments or run-on sentences (e.g., the final sentence of the report). To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures, such as using relative clauses (e.g., '...surpassing Thailand, which accounted for...') and ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and a correctly conjugated verb.

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