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Band 5+: The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays car expenditure data (in millions of USD) from 1995 to 2005 across four Asian countries: China shows values of 70, 73, 74, 82, and 95; Vietnam's figures are 40, 48, 52, 57, and 61; Thailand records 20, 21, 32, 45, and 55; Indonesia presents 60, 60, 64, 69, and 70 for the respective years of 1995, 1997, 1999, 2003, and 2005.

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The line graph illustrates the amount of money spent on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand and Indonesia from 1995 to 2005.

Overall, all countries showed an upward trend of money spent on cars. China dominated the other countries in spending money on cars throughout the period. Indonesia was the country where money spending increased significantly, while in the remaining countries, it rose steadily.

China accounted for the largest share over the given period, starting at 80 million US dollars in 1995, and increased to approximately 95 million US dollars by the end. Regarding Vietnam, the figure started at approximately 55 million in 1995, climbed gradually to around 75 million US dollars over the period, which was considerably lower than China.

Turning to Indonesia, who spent the lowest amount of money most of the period, beginning at 30 million US dollars in 1995, rose steadily to 40 million US dollars. After which, the figure surpassed Thailand in 2003 and surged to just over 70 million US dollars close to Vietnam in 2005. Thailand hovered between 50 million US dollars and just over 60 million US dollars over the given period, rendering it the smallest share by the end.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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million: 9

dollars: 8

money: 5

period: 5

spent: 3

vietnam: 3

thailand: 3

indonesia: 3

countries: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and identifies the general upward trend. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data reporting that affect the clarity of the comparison. For instance, the report identifies Indonesia as having the lowest spending for most of the period, whereas the visual description suggests Thailand was the lowest. Additionally, the specific figures provided for Vietnam and Thailand do not align with the data provided in the description. To improve, ensure that the data points mentioned are accurately mapped to the correct countries and that the comparisons between countries are based on the correct starting and ending values.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas in the final paragraph is somewhat confusing due to sentence structure issues. For instance, the sentence starting with 'Turning to Indonesia...' is a fragment that lacks a clear subject-verb connection, making it difficult to follow the flow. To improve, ensure that each sentence is a complete thought and use more sophisticated cohesive devices to link trends between different countries rather than just listing them.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing trends (e.g., 'upward trend', 'climbed gradually', 'surpassed', 'surged'). However, there is some repetitive phrasing regarding 'money spent on cars'. Additionally, there are some awkward collocations, such as 'the country where money spending increased' instead of 'the country with the most significant increase in spending'. Aim to use a wider variety of nouns and verbs to describe financial data, such as 'expenditure', 'outlay', or 'consumption'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that affect the clarity of the report. The most notable is the use of relative clauses and sentence fragments; for example, 'Turning to Indonesia, who spent...' is grammatically incorrect as 'who' should refer to people, not a country, and the sentence structure fails to connect the subject to the subsequent verb phrase. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence construction in the final paragraph. To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that every sentence has a clear, grammatically correct subject and predicate.

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