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Band 4+: The chart gives information on average monthly temperatures in Paris, Boston, and Melbourne.

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The image is a line graph depicting average monthly temperatures for Paris (yellow), Boston (blue), and Melbourne (red), with temperature in degrees on the Y-axis (5-35, increment of 5) and months Jan-Dec on the X-axis; Paris ranges from 5-25 with peaks in Jul (25) and lows in Jan (5), Boston ranges from -5 to 30 with a peak in Jul (30) and a low in Jan (-5), Melbourne ranges from 15-25 with highest in Feb (25) and lowest in Jul/Aug (15); Paris and Boston show similar temperature patterns with opposite trends, while Melbourne displays an inverse pattern due to being in the Southern Hemisphere.

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The line graph illustrates the average monthly temperature in three different cities.

It is clear that, Melbourne monthly temperature most higher than Paris and Boston at first for four months. However, Melbourne temperature went down and Boston weather rose dramatically, weather of Paris growth moderately.

Looking at the information in more detail, at January, Melbourne weather higher, only than other two major countries, with 25, while at Paris and Boston weather cooler, only under 10 and 4 respectively. At April, Paris and Boston climate began to rose steadily, with 14 and 16, whereas Melbourne weather begin to decrease gradually, nearly 22.

By August, Paris temperature reached a peak nearly 32 degree, and Boston weather increased significantly from under 10 to 24 between January and August. In contrast, Melbourne weather reduced considerably, only 18. At the final month, Melbourne temperature went up to 26 compared to Paris and Boston weather fell dramatically, with only 5 and 8 respectively.

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weather: 8

melbourne: 6

paris: 6

boston: 6

temperature: 5

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the main trends and compare the data, but it contains several inaccuracies and some irrelevant or inappropriate information. For example, it states that Paris temperature reached a peak of nearly 32 degrees in August, while the visual description indicates a peak of 25 in July. The report also misidentifies the cities as 'major countries' and uses informal language like 'weather higher' and 'rose dramatically'. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key features from the visual description, use more precise and formal vocabulary, and ensure comparisons are clear and correct. Avoid making up data or trends not supported by the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information by time periods, but the flow is disrupted by unclear references and abrupt transitions. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'only than other two major countries'). Paragraphing is present but not skillfully managed, as the second paragraph mixes comparisons without a clear logical progression. To improve, use clearer linking words (e.g., 'in contrast,' 'similarly') and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect, such as overall trends in one paragraph and detailed comparisons in another.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with limited range (e.g., 'weather' used repeatedly instead of 'temperature'). There are attempts at variation (e.g., 'rose dramatically,' 'decrease gradually'), but some word choices are inappropriate or unclear (e.g., 'Melbourne monthly temperature most higher'). To improve, expand vocabulary with precise terms like 'peak,' 'trough,' 'fluctuate,' and 'plateau,' and use synonyms for 'temperature' (e.g., 'climate,' 'readings'). Avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'only than other two major countries.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. Examples include incorrect comparatives ('most higher'), missing articles ('weather of Paris growth moderately'), and subject-verb agreement issues ('Melbourne weather begin'). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex forms. To improve, practice using comparative structures correctly (e.g., 'much higher than'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and vary sentence types by incorporating subordinate clauses (e.g., 'While Melbourne's temperature decreased, Boston's rose significantly').

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