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The image displays a line graph illustrating population changes in the United States, Nigeria, and Japan from 1950 to 2050; United States starts at approximately 150 million in 1950, rises to about 300 million by 2000, and is projected to reach close to 400 million by 2050; Nigeria begins at around 50 million in 1950, grows to roughly 125 million by 2000, and is anticipated to surge to about 600 million by 2050; Japan's population is near 85 million in 1950, climbs to around 125 million by 2000, but decreases to under 150 million by 2050.

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The chart illustrates how the population in the United States, Nigeria and Japan changed from 1950 to 2000 and was expected to be between 2000 and 2050.

Overall, the proportion of inhabitants in the United States and Nigeria were predicted to increase sharply by the year of 2050, while that of Japan followed to a lesser extent.

The number of Nigerian residents started at the lowest at about fifty millions in 1950, but it rose dramatically to nearly one hundred fifty millions in 2000. A somewhat similar trend can also be seen in the figure for American people. That of the United States had the highest population at nearly two hundreds millions in 1950 before experiencing a significant jump to over three hundreds millions in 2000. That of Japan also grew, but to a lesser extent. A slight upturn was witnessed in the Japanese population from one hundred millions in 1950 to one hundred fifty in 2000.

From 2000 to 2050, the number of Nigerian citizens was projected to go up to six hundreds millions in 2050 and surpass other nations. The United States resident population also was anticipated to undergo a noticeable growth to nearly four hundreds fifty millions in 2050. The demographic size of Japanese people was forecasted to adopt an opposite trend. There can be a marginal drop in that of Japanese to about one hundred twenty in 2050.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the historical data and projections for the three countries. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs for past and future trends. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Japan's population in 1950 is stated as 100 million instead of 85 million, and the US projection is given as 450 million instead of close to 400 million). Additionally, the overview could be more precise, as Japan's population is not increasing but decreasing in the projection. To improve, ensure data accuracy and refine the overview to accurately reflect the main trends, such as Nigeria's surge and Japan's decline.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The overview is clear, and the data is presented in two main paragraphs (past and future). However, the cohesion could be improved. For example, the phrase 'followed to a lesser extent' is unclear, and the transition between the two time periods could be smoother. Using more varied linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central topic would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'proportion of inhabitants', 'demographic size'). Words like 'dramatically', 'significant jump', and 'marginal drop' show a range of lexical items. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrases, such as 'followed to a lesser extent' and 'adopt an opposite trend'. More precise and natural collocations would improve the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and issues with punctuation. For example, 'the proportion of inhabitants... were predicted' should be 'was predicted', and 'two hundreds millions' should be 'two hundred million'. The phrase 'There can be a marginal drop' is awkward and could be rephrased. More consistent use of correct plural forms and subject-verb agreement would improve accuracy.

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