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Band 5+: You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear sir,

My name is Navjot Kaur and, I am the resident of ABC colony. I have heard about your plan of constructing new shopping mall which is not acceptable for me like others in our locality.

Yesterday, I came to know from my neighbour when I returned from my work that city council has approved the application of construction. He and other residents were feeling anxious regarding this plan.

This place is very close to my home and the whole area is very calm. As there are very few buildings and rest of the land is covered with greenery and trees which is very beneficial for our ecosystem. Personally, I am not happy with this development because it will make our place noisy and polluted.

I am writing this on behalf of listening from a known source and have not full information on the complete strategic plan. I will be delightful to know more about the forming proposal.

Yours sincerely

Navjot Kaur

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and structure would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences lack precision, impacting the overall flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would demonstrate a greater command of the language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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