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Band 6+: How can people be motivated to learn new things?

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Well, in my opinion, there are many ways to show people how they can motivate and encourage young people to learn new things. Thanks to technology, we have many opportunities and options for future work, as you can see in the technology and the internet. When young children see these beautiful improvements, they can be encouraged to start learning something new that they actually want.

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Well, in my opinion, I believe that there are a lot of ways to show people how they can motivate and encourage them, specifically young people, to learn new things because thanks to technology we have a lot of opportunity and offers for future work as you can see in the technology in the internet and when young children see these beautiful improvements that they can encourage to start learning new something that they want actually.

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You are going to give a talk about your career choice. what job and education opportunities young people have after finishing the 9th form • what job you would like to do in the future, explain your choice • what advice your parents have given you about your career choice

What kind of jobs are popular among young people today?

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