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Band 6+: The chart below shows information about heart attacks by age and gender in USA.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts heart attacks per year in the USA, segmented by age group and gender, measured in thousands. In the 29-44 age group, men experienced 123,000 heart attacks and women 3,000. In the 45-64 age group, men experienced 424,000 heart attacks compared to 136,000 for women. The 65+ age group saw 440,000 heart attacks in men and 374,000 in women.

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The given diagram illustrates statistics on heart attacks depending on age which is divided into three age groups and gender in the USA. Unities are measured in thousands.

The most obvious trend in the graph is that the number of heart attacks grows with age. For instance, ages 29-44 tend to have in total 126 thousands of people suffering from heart attacks, while individuals from 45 to 64 are having 560 thousands and people over 65 are having 814 thousands.

The second tendency is that compared to women, men suffer from strokes more. If we compare males and females in adolescence, there are 123 thousands per man and 3 thousands per woman. The highest occurrence is seen in the 65+ age group, where 440000 men and 374000 women suffer from heart attacks.

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Task Response

6.5

The report accurately presents the main features of the data and makes relevant comparisons between genders and age groups. Minor inaccuracies in the data summary do not detract significantly from the overall response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, some minor issues with logical flow and paragraphing could be improved for better clarity and cohesion. The grammar errors affect the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate to the task. While mostly accurate, some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures. However, the presence of grammatical errors impacts the overall accuracy and fluency.

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