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Band 5+: Do you think advertising influences what people buy?

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Yes, it's obvious that advertising influences what people buy. There are so many factors. Nowadays, we live in a modern day where every society is surrounded by social media. The availability of the internet is everywhere. Due to the impact of the internet, people are using many social media platforms to spend their time. Nowadays, even new courses are introduced based on digital marketing where people have to.

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Yes, it obvious the advertising influence the people what they buy. There are so many factors. Nowadays, it is a modern day. Every society of people is surrounded by social media. The availability of the internet is everywhere. Due to the impact of the internet world, people are using so many social media to spend their time. Nowadays, even new courses are introduced on the basis of digital marketing where people have to.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 3

nowadays: 2

where: 2

social: 2

media: 2

internet: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and acknowledges the influence of advertising. However, it lacks detailed explanation and specific examples to support the claim. Consider providing concrete examples of advertising techniques and their effects on consumer behavior to strengthen your response. Also, focus on directly answering the question rather than discussing related topics like the prevalence of social media.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks a strong conclusion and smooth transitions between ideas. Work on connecting your thoughts more seamlessly. For example, the phrase 'Nowadays, it is a modern day' is redundant. Try to be more concise and direct in expressing your ideas.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Phrases like 'so many factors' are somewhat vague. Try to use more specific examples to support your points. The phrase 'social media' is used repeatedly; consider using synonyms or more specific platform names.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar contains several errors, such as 'it obvious' and 'people are using so many social media'. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to enhance the sophistication of your language.

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