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Band 7+: 4. Why do some people not care about their actions in public?

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A possible reason may be a lack of awareness or self-discipline. Some people don't adhere to public norms and societal expectations because they think that since others don't know them in public, it isn't necessary to follow public expectations. In addition, a lack of upbringing, especially among young people, is another factor contributing to this, as unfortunately, good behavior in public isn't emphasized and valued in families for children.

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A possible reason may be due to a lack of awareness or self-discipline. Some people don’t adhere to public norms and societal expectations, because they think that as others don’t know them in public, so it isn’t necessary to adhere to public expectations. In addition, a lack of upbringing, especially among young people, is another factor contributing to this, as unfortunately good behavior in public isn’t emphasized and valued in families for children.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors. The sentence 'because they think that as others don't know them in public, so it isn't necessary to adhere to public expectations' is slightly awkward and could be improved for clarity and conciseness. While the range of grammatical structures is good, using more complex sentence structures would enhance the overall grammatical range.

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