Band 5+: Describe a small change you made that had a big impact. You should say: - What the change was - When and why you made it - How difficult it was to implement - And explain the positive effects it had on your life.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the topic by describing a change (losing weight) and explains its positive impact. However, it lacks specific details about when the change was made and the reasons behind it. The explanation of benefits is somewhat general and could be more developed with concrete examples. To improve, provide a clearer timeline, elaborate on the decision-making process, and include specific outcomes or experiences that illustrate the positive impact. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is somewhat coherent and follows a logical sequence, but it lacks clear organization and cohesive devices. There is noticeable repetition and self-correction (e.g., 'So this is change or this is a small change affecting me a lot'). To improve, structure your answer with clear paragraphs or signposting (e.g., 'First, I will talk about...', 'The reason I decided...', 'The main benefit was...'). Use linking words like 'therefore', 'as a result', 'in addition' to connect ideas more smoothly.

You used some good vocabulary (e.g., 'doomed', 'abandoned from society', 'boost your confidence', 'delighted', 'challenge myself'), but there are inaccuracies and limited range. For example, 'I was 18 km' should be 'I was 18 kg overweight' (km is a distance, not weight). Also, 'feel very doomed' is not idiomatic; 'felt doomed' is better. To improve, expand your vocabulary with synonyms and precise terms (e.g., 'overweight', 'isolated', 'self-esteem', 'transformative'). Avoid repetition of 'change' and 'feel'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The biggest change that affect my life' should be 'that affected my life' (past tense). 'I was 18 km' is incorrect (should be 'I was 18 kg overweight'). 'I decide' should be 'I decided' (past tense). 'I feel so delightful and proud to myself' should be 'I felt so delighted and proud of myself'. 'Give me the confidence' should be 'It gave me the confidence'. To improve, practice using past tense consistently and check subject-verb agreement. Also, work on using a wider range of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses.