Now I am going to talk about an advertisement which I have seen a couple of months ago while I was watching a movie at home with my friends. I find this advertisement is really useless and because of that I really don’t like this advertisement. This advertisement just shows that a teenager was quite depressed and anxious about his work and he was really stressed out. He was going to the kitchen and he found this one of the drinks called Stink. It’s like an energy drink. He drank the drink and when he came back he became more energized and more productive. After that he got a high mark on his project at the school. So I think this is not genuine at all. This advertisement actually shouldn’t be aired up because this advertisement gives a forced message to the public. How a person can be more energized and how they can become more productive while just drinking this energy drink? It is not possible at all. So first of all it gives a false message to the public. Apart from that the teenager can be addicted to this type of soft drinks. This is not at all good for their health. And probably the teenagers will stop to do any efforts or hard work. They might think that these kinds of drinks will make them energy. It is actually not right. So if the person does not do a hard work or doesn’t have any determination they cannot achieve their goal. So these kinds of false messages are given to the public should be prohibited. So this is the advertisement I really don’t like to watch. So whenever I saw this advertisement I feel that this is not the right advertisement for the public or especially for teenagers at all.
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Now I am going to talk about an advertisement that I saw a couple of months ago while I was watching a movie at home with my friends. I find this advertisement really useless, and because of that, I really don't like it. This advertisement shows a teenager who is quite depressed and anxious about his work, and he is really stressed out. He goes to the kitchen and finds a drink called Stink. It's an energy drink. He drinks the beverage, and when he comes back, he becomes more energized and productive. After that, he gets a high mark on his project at school. I think this is not genuine at all. This advertisement should not be aired because it sends a forced message to the public. How can a person become more energized and productive just by drinking this energy drink? It is not possible at all. First of all, it gives a false message to the public. Apart from that, the teenager can become addicted to this type of soft drink. This is not good for their health. Teenagers might stop making any efforts or working hard. They might think that these kinds of drinks will give them energy. That is not right. If a person does not work hard or lacks determination, they cannot achieve their goals. These kinds of false messages given to the public should be prohibited. This is the advertisement I really don't like to watch. Whenever I see this advertisement, I feel that it is not the right advertisement for the public, especially for teenagers.
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