Band 6+: Do you think that aquatic animals are dangerous ?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of dangerous aquatic animals. However, it focuses heavily on the dangers posed by these animals and lacks a broader discussion of the topic. Consider exploring other aspects of the question, such as the relative danger of different aquatic animals or the measures taken to mitigate the risks they pose.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slight hesitation are present, but overall, the ideas flow logically. Try to incorporate smoother transitions between your points to enhance fluency.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The use of "fishers" instead of "fish" is a minor error. While the information about tetrodotoxin is impressive, consider using more varied vocabulary to describe the danger of aquatic animals beyond just sharks and pufferfish. Explore synonyms for 'dangerous' and 'toxic'.

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The phrase "It is enough to kill 30 other people" is slightly awkward and grammatically incorrect. The article before 'cyanate' is missing. While the answer demonstrates some grammatical range, focus on improving accuracy and sentence structure for a higher score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to showcase your grammatical range.