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Band 6+: Do you think that aquatic animals are dangerous ?

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I think it depends on the variety of species and their context because the harm depends on the situation. Some aquatic animals should be considered very harmful to humans, like sharks and crocodiles. We have to follow safety procedures when we are in the ocean for sea-level activities. However, most of the animals are not very harmful if we do not disrupt their environment. The level of danger only depends on how we behave with them.

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I think it’s depending on variety of species and their context because the harm is depending on what kind of situation is this and some aquatic animals should be considered as very harmful to human like shark and any crocodiles items. So we have to make safety procedures when we are in ocean so sea level activities and not that most of the animals are not to be very harmful if we not disrupt their extinction and the activity it’s only depending on what how to behave with them.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

depends: 3

their: 2

animals: 2

harmful: 2

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Pronunciation

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Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and addresses the question comprehensively. Consider exploring the concept of 'danger' more deeply, perhaps by differentiating between inherent danger and danger posed by human interaction. Adding specific examples of less dangerous aquatic animals would enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are some instances of repetition and self-correction. Try to plan your response briefly before speaking to improve coherence and reduce hesitations. For example, instead of 'the harm is depending on what kind of situation is this', you could say 'the danger depends on the situation'.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate, but more precise word choices would enhance the response. Words like 'items' (in reference to crocodiles) are imprecise. Consider using more sophisticated vocabulary, such as 'predatory' instead of 'harmful' in some contexts. The phrase 'disrupt their extinction' is incorrect; consider 'disrupt their habitat' instead.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect tense usage ('it's depending'), and sentence structure issues. The sentence 'it's only depending on what how to behave with them' is grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences.

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