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Band 6+: how diffucult is to become very rich in today's world

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Well, I think the hardest part of becoming a very rich person in today's world is when you have to pay taxes to the government. Because apparently, when a person becomes very rich, they have to pay a lot of tax to their country. For instance, very wealthy people from my country are more likely to pay almost a million dollars each month to pay for their government because of their wealth.

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Well, I think the hardest part to become a very rich person in today’s world is, uh, when you have to pay tax for the government. Because apparently, uh, when a person becomes so rich, they have to pay so much tax for their countries. For instance, a very wealthy people from my country more likely to pay tax for, like, almost a million dollars if each month, uh, to pay for their governments, um, because of their wealth.

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and breadth. It focuses narrowly on one aspect (taxes) and doesn't explore other factors contributing to the difficulty of accumulating significant wealth. Consider discussing additional challenges such as market competition, economic downturns, and the need for innovation or specialized skills.

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The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There are some hesitations and fillers ("uh", "um"). Try to speak more smoothly and confidently, reducing the use of fillers.

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Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the answer is understandable, using more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of "a lot of tax," consider using terms like "substantial taxes" or "a significant tax burden."

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