Band 5+: how diffucult is to become very rich in today's world

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and breadth. It focuses narrowly on one aspect (taxes) and doesn't explore other challenges or factors contributing to the difficulty of accumulating significant wealth. Consider discussing broader issues such as competition, market volatility, economic inequality, and the need for specialized skills or innovative ideas.

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There's some hesitation and repetition. Improving the linking words and sentence structure would enhance fluency. Consider adding a concluding sentence to summarize your thoughts.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Phrases like "a million dollars each month" are a bit simplistic. Try using more nuanced vocabulary to describe the challenges of wealth.

There are grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement ("a wealthy person...are more likely") and article usage. The sentence structure is also somewhat simple. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures.