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Band 6+: How do you think social media has changed the way we value privacy?

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Yeah, the people who are interested in social media and who want to share about themselves on social media, so there is no privacy for them. I think it is not a good thing to spend your life on social media and also share yourself on it. I am not interested in these things, and I also do not want to share my privacy with anyone, including on social media. So I get very tired of this, and I would not like to share these kinds of things. I use social media, but not in a way that I share my personal life or my privacy. I just use social media for entertainment, enjoyment, and experience. I don't like to share anything on social media because I am not interested. But the person who is interested likes to share on social media about her life.

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Yeah, the people who are interested in social media and who are interested to share about their self on social media, so there are no privacy of them was held in. I think it is not a good thing to spend your life on social media and also share yourself on social media. I was not interested in these things and I also not interested to share my privacy with anyone and also on social media. So I get very tired from this and also I would not like to share these kind of things and also I use social media but not that type I shared my own personal life on social media and also my privacy on social media. I just use social media for entertainment and enjoyment and experience. I don’t like to share anything on social media because I was not interested. But the person who interested, she was like to share on social media about her life.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

social: 8

media: 8

share: 7

interested: 4

privacy: 3

life: 3

about: 2

these: 2

things: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and broader perspective. It primarily focuses on personal preferences rather than a comprehensive analysis of how social media has changed the value of privacy. To improve, consider discussing the various ways social media impacts privacy perceptions and behaviors across different demographics, and avoid excessive focus on personal experiences.

Fluency & Coherence

The response contains noticeable hesitations and some repetition, which affects the flow of speech. The ideas are generally connected, but the coherence could be improved with more varied linking words and a clearer structure. Try to organize your thoughts more logically and use cohesive devices to guide the listener through your argument.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it lacks precision and variety. The same words and phrases are repeated (e.g., 'interested,' 'social media,' 'share'). To improve, try to use synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately and effectively. For example, instead of repeatedly saying 'share,' you could use words like 'divulge,' 'reveal,' or 'disclose.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The response contains grammatical errors that sometimes impede understanding. There are issues with verb tense ('there are no privacy of them was held in'), subject-verb agreement ('the person who interested, she was like to share'), and sentence structure. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately. Practice constructing complex sentences and pay attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

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