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Band 6+: How might the increasing reliance on technology affect traditional forms of community engagement?

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In my opinion, the increasing reliance on technology can affect traditional forms of community engagement. When people use technology a lot, they depend on social media, which makes them less socially engaged. Traditional forms of communication, like face-to-face interactions or meetings, are becoming less attractive, and people are shifting their attention to technological meetings. That's why I think there is serious reliance on technology nowadays.

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In my opinion, increasing reliance on technology can affect traditional forms of community engagement. Because when people use technology a lot, they depend on social media. And in turn, it makes them easier and a social people. Then, traditional forms like communication, face-to-face communications or meetings are getting less attractive and people are taking their attention to technological meetings. That’s why I think Serious Reliance on Technology a lot nowadays.

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