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Band 6+: How might the increasing reliance on technology affect traditional forms of community engagement?

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Well, I have never thought about that, but let me clarify that technology, nowadays, impacts everywhere, including community and education. The increasing addiction to technology, like using tablets and smartphones, is evident. So it might have both good and bad effects. The good effect is that we have improved in many areas, but on the other side, we can lose our morals and some traditional experiences.

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Well, I have never thinking about that, but let me clarify that technology, nowadays, technology impact everywhere, and like community or education and so on. And increasing addiction is the technology. Like we use tablet, we tablet phones, and I think we have already addiction that. So it might be both good and bad effect. like good effect it we we already improve everywhere but on the other side we can lost our morale and some traditional traditional experience

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