Band 7+: (identify) jobs that focus on helping other people

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response adequately addresses the prompt by providing relevant examples of jobs focused on helping others. To improve, consider expanding on the range of professions and providing more diverse examples beyond the traditional roles mentioned. Elaborating on the specific ways these professions help people would also strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and slightly awkward phrasing ("who are not so well as well as"), but the overall message is clear and easy to follow. Minor improvements in sentence structure would enhance fluency.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the task. The candidate uses words like "tend to the ill" and "assist" effectively. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to demonstrate a wider range, for example, instead of 'service jobs' the candidate could have used 'emergency services' or 'public services'.

While the grammar is mostly correct, there are a few minor errors ("turn up to" instead of "turn to"). The sentence structures are relatively simple. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, would improve the score.