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Band 7+: (identify) jobs that focus on helping other people

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Jobs that focus on helping other people mostly include doctors who tend to the ill, as well as nurses who assist the doctors in caring for patients. Other service jobs include firefighters and policemen, who help people in need and those who don't have anyone else to turn to.

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Jobs that focus on helping other people mostly are doctors who tend to the ill people who are not so well as well as nurses who help the doctors to take care of the people and other service jobs like firefighters, policemen who help the people who are in need and don’t have anyone else to turn up to.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

other: 2

people: 2

include: 2

doctors: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The response adequately addresses the prompt by providing relevant examples of jobs focused on helping others. To improve, consider expanding on the range of professions and providing more diverse examples beyond the traditional roles mentioned. Elaborating on the specific ways these professions help people would also strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and slightly awkward phrasing ("who are not so well as well as"), but the overall message is clear and easy to follow. Minor improvements in sentence structure would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the task. The candidate uses words like "tend to the ill" and "assist" effectively. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to demonstrate a wider range, for example, instead of 'service jobs' the candidate could have used 'emergency services' or 'public services'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the grammar is mostly correct, there are a few minor errors ("turn up to" instead of "turn to"). The sentence structures are relatively simple. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, would improve the score.

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