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Band 6+: In what ways might globalization be impacting cultural identity in your country?

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It's quite a challenging question for me, but I think this trend has both benefits and drawbacks. First, I believe globalization helps people improve their cultural identity. This is because local people tend to share their cultures with people from other countries. However, this trend also has drawbacks, as it creates a mixture of two cultures when people visit other communities.

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It’s quite a challenging question for me, but I think this trend has both benefit and drawbacks. First, I think globalization helps people to improve their cultural identity. This is because local people tend to tell their cultures to other countries’ people. So this trend has drawbacks. This mixture of two cultures by visiting people who live in other communities.

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this: 3

trend: 2

drawbacks: 2

their: 2

cultures: 2

other: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from more specific examples and a deeper exploration of the complexities of globalization's impact on cultural identity. Consider elaborating on both the positive and negative aspects with concrete illustrations to strengthen your argument.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('I think'). The ideas are presented, but the connections between them could be clearer. Try to use more varied cohesive devices to link your ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'I think' too often. Practice structuring your answers with clear topic sentences and supporting details.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. Words like 'benefit' and 'drawbacks' are used, but the response could be enhanced with more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to cultural identity and globalization. For example, instead of 'improve their cultural identity,' you could say 'strengthen their sense of cultural heritage' or 'promote their cultural values.' Expand your vocabulary related to cultural exchange and its effects.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are some inaccuracies. For example, 'tell their cultures to other countries' people' is not grammatically correct; it should be 'share their cultures with people from other countries.' The sentence structure is also quite simple. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and different verb tenses, and pay attention to accuracy in your sentence construction.

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