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Band 7+: Part 3 1. Do you think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged?

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Yes, I believe children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged. When children have support from their environment, parents, and relatives, they feel happy and motivated to pursue their dreams. This support system makes them more confident and empowered, knowing they have a strong foundation to rely on.

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Yes, I believe children are, um, more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged. When children have support from their environment, parents and relatives, they feel happy and motivated to pursue their dreams. This support system makes more confident and empowered, knowing they have a strong foundation to rely on.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant and addresses the question directly. The student provides a clear and logical explanation of why encouragement is important for children's goal achievement. The answer could be slightly more developed by providing specific examples of how encouragement can manifest itself in different situations. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

7.5

The answer is delivered fluently with only a minor hesitation at the beginning. The ideas are well-organized and presented in a coherent manner. The use of cohesive devices like 'when' and 'this' helps to connect the ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like 'support system,' 'empowered,' and 'foundation.' However, there is room for improvement in terms of using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of 'happy,' the student could use 'optimistic' or 'enthusiastic.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

The answer demonstrates good grammatical accuracy with only a minor error in the sentence 'This support system makes more confident and empowered.' The student should pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use the correct form of the verb 'make.' Overall, the grammar is accurate and varied, showing a good command of English grammar.

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