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Band 6+: Part 3 1. Do you think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged?

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Of course, I think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged because children can create a lot of opportunities. They can feel happy and receive more support from their environment, parents, and relatives. This encouragement makes them feel motivated when they want to pursue their goals. I think they are more likely to have access to safe food, and if they are supported by the things around them, I believe they can have a good everyday experience.

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Of course, I think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are incorrect because children can create a lot of people or children can feel happy and they give more sports, they give more sports encouragement from their environment, environment, parents and relatives so they feel happy and motivated when they want to do it and I think they are easy to get more safe food and if they are incorrect by a lot of things around them, I think they have a good everyday

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points about the benefits of encouragement for children. However, it could be improved by focusing more directly on how encouragement helps children achieve their goals, rather than on the broader benefits of a supportive environment. The connection between encouragement and goal achievement could be more explicitly stated and developed with specific examples.

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Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Phrases like "create a lot of people" are unclear. Focus on using more specific and sophisticated vocabulary to express your ideas clearly. For example, instead of 'create a lot of people', consider 'create many opportunities'.

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