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Band 6+: Part 3 1. Do you think children are more likely to achieve their goals if they are encouraged?

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I think children don't have much knowledge about different things, and they don't have much motivation to achieve their goals. With the help of someone, they can easily achieve anything. Like when I was a child, there was a time I didn't know how to make a project for a competition. My teacher motivated me, and I completed my project within the stipulated time. So definitely, if there are people who encourage children, they can do very good work and also achieve a lot in their lives.

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I think children don’t have much knowledge about different things and they don’t have much motivation of achieving goal. Because with the help of someone they can easily achieve anything. Like when I was child there a time I didn’t know how to make a project in project competition. There a time my teacher motivated me and I completed my project within stipulated time. So definitely if any people who encourage to children definitely they can do very well work and also they can achieve lot of achievement in their life.

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